
From the extreme chaos
Around a Yellow star
Dust and smoke
Churned with gravity
From afflictions to bliss
The life took shape
A rare miracle happened
With the birth of the blue
The Blue is still spinning
Dancing on the tune
Celebrating the bliss
Along with the moon
A dance in the wild
Around a yellow bonfire
Ignoring our sins
May Surpass our existence
©2020 Piyush Singh
Happy Earth Day too!!!
šš That’s nice! Well done!
Yes… the world doesn’t stop turning. . .
What a great poem! Earth is our planet and our home; it should really inspire more poetry than it does.
Yes, we all have to care about Earth if we really want to thrive… Though earth may not need us to thrive… Thank you for your kind words!
Oh what a timely reminder :’) it’s too easy to forget about Earth itself. Though, retrospectively, like lions on roads and swans in canals, seems like Earth will do fine in the middle of our chaos. Lovely poem!
Earth has a habit of going through chaos.. We need earth.. Earth may not need us… Thanks a lot for your lovely words!
Such a great writing, I always admire how people think in such a way!! It’s just beyond words and each of your image sync with your poetry. Keep writing!
Thanks a lot for your admiration.. Really means alot!
Pleasures mine.
Nice that you muse on blue… like I also, for so long, do.
Thanks a lot for your lovely words!
Thanks for having been so like-supportive of my poetry! Means a lot. I truly appreciate it. :)) š„°š
Really great to come across your blog… Pleasure is mine!
Thank you and your poetry is beautiful!! šš
My poem on same subject. A gloomy world
Read it… It’s wonderful
Brilliant! Wonderful piece. —CC
Thanks a lot for your kind words!
You are welcome. Stay healthy and safe. —CC
Beautifully composed.
Thanks a lot friend!
Nicely done! Excellent title!
Thank you Benjamin… I always look for metaphors and analogies!
You’re welcome. This one works so well!
Nicely done ! Brilliant play with words in the colour palette
Glad to have connected š
Totally my pleasure to come across your’s
Thank you for sharing
It’s beautifully written! Worth giving time to read!
Thank you so much Leif! It really mean a lot