My Journey Within

September 12, 2021singhpiyush6089

I am trying to reach there,
But my emotions are feeding me .
It’s waging a war against my true self,
Obstructing my way to my inner self

The more I identify with my mind,
The farther I get away from me .
The more I let my emotions drive,
The lesser I feel my valuable life

It was then I Decided to let it go,
felt life in the stillness around ,
shattered my ego stuck in illusory time
Finally found myself Beyond my mind!

Navin September 12, 2021 / 7:51 pm

A profound piece!

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- singhpiyush6089 September 12, 2021 / 7:52 pm
  
  I am glad you connected with this .Thank you so much Navin…
  
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  - Navin September 12, 2021 / 8:01 pm
    
    I very much did, Piyush….so thank you!
Lia September 12, 2021 / 8:35 pm

Oh, this is just wonderful!! Very very happy to read your work again!

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- singhpiyush6089 September 13, 2021 / 5:43 am
  
  I am glad you liked ..thanks a ton….
  
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Hemalatha Ramesh September 13, 2021 / 12:15 pm

Last stanza was brilliant!

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- singhpiyush6089 September 13, 2021 / 12:17 pm
  
  I am glad you liked it…thank you for your kind words…
  
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Susi Bocks September 22, 2021 / 2:09 am

So much depth and truth in this piece, Piyush! Good job!

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- singhpiyush6089 September 22, 2021 / 6:49 am
  
  Thank you for your encouraging words…
  
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  - Susi Bocks September 22, 2021 / 7:47 pm
    
    You’re welcome! 🙂