A Long Walk

Self clicked

Far from home
With my spirits unscathed
I embarked upon a journey
Uphill, on a Callous road

As time elapsed
Each step brought confusion
My fatigue birthed illusion
As I struggled down the road

Then Someone joined me
A creature, selflessly
A pillar to lift my spirit
A dog shared my ordeal

Our steps synchronised
Our spirits became one
Our faces glowed with pride
And we hardly cared for summit

©2020 Piyush Singh

22 thoughts on “A Long Walk

  1. Jay Bleu May 11, 2020 / 3:56 pm

    The power of companionship

    • singhpiyush6089 May 11, 2020 / 3:58 pm

      Yes it is, a selfless friend… Thank you for connecting with this

      • Jay Bleu May 11, 2020 / 3:59 pm

        A man’s best friend – you’re welcome!

  2. Shirley Allard May 11, 2020 / 3:56 pm

    It certainly looks and sounds like a peaceful and beautiful journey. 😊

    • singhpiyush6089 May 11, 2020 / 4:00 pm

      Yes, like a pilgrimage… Thanks a lot for your kind words!

  3. lightoflife May 11, 2020 / 5:26 pm

    Far from home,
    When we unite.
    Shared a story
    Travelled our miles..

    Far from home
    We shared the steps,
    Spirits together; filled
    Aching gaps..

    • singhpiyush6089 May 11, 2020 / 5:50 pm

      Really wonderful words to continue with this.. Your words are gems…

      • lightoflife May 11, 2020 / 5:52 pm

        It’s your emotions that I could connect in your writing that I wish reply that way. You write wonderfully.
        but Thank you so much, am glad you liked it.

      • singhpiyush6089 May 11, 2020 / 5:53 pm

        I mean, I struggle with words but I think you don’t… Please never stop writing

      • lightoflife May 11, 2020 / 6:00 pm

        That puts a smile on a face. Thanks once again.. We shall continue to express..
        “Depths touched
        Words that blushed
        A scenery of words
        Graciously brushed”.

      • singhpiyush6089 May 11, 2020 / 6:01 pm

        Yes we will.. Another set of lovely words..!

    • singhpiyush6089 May 11, 2020 / 6:08 pm

      Yes, especially with a selfless creature… Thanks for connecting with this!

  4. Lia May 12, 2020 / 3:25 pm

    Oh I love this one… tells a story ✨

    • singhpiyush6089 May 12, 2020 / 3:26 pm

      Yeah, a life which we should embrace… Thank you for connecting with this!

  5. Mizou May 14, 2020 / 7:53 am

    So nice ! Thanks for sharing . And thank also for following my blog.

    • singhpiyush6089 May 14, 2020 / 7:59 am

      My pleasure… You have an amazing work out there. Keep going

  6. bejamin4 May 22, 2020 / 12:08 pm

    Nice ending. These lines, too: “Each step brought confusion / My fatigue birthed illusion”.

    • singhpiyush6089 May 22, 2020 / 2:49 pm

      Tried my best.. Thank you brother for your kind words!

      • bejamin4 May 24, 2020 / 11:07 am

        Welcome. Your best is more than adequate!

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