Far from home
With my spirits unscathed
I embarked upon a journey
Uphill, on a Callous road
As time elapsed
Each step brought confusion
My fatigue birthed illusion
As I struggled down the road
Then Someone joined me
A creature, selflessly
A pillar to lift my spirit
A dog shared my ordeal
Our steps synchronised
Our spirits became one
Our faces glowed with pride
And we hardly cared for summit
©2020 Piyush Singh
Love this
Thanks a lot for connecting with this!
The power of companionship
Yes it is, a selfless friend… Thank you for connecting with this
A man’s best friend – you’re welcome!
It certainly looks and sounds like a peaceful and beautiful journey. 😊
Yes, like a pilgrimage… Thanks a lot for your kind words!
Far from home,
When we unite.
Shared a story
Travelled our miles..
Far from home
We shared the steps,
Spirits together; filled
Aching gaps..
Really wonderful words to continue with this.. Your words are gems…
It’s your emotions that I could connect in your writing that I wish reply that way. You write wonderfully.
but Thank you so much, am glad you liked it.
I mean, I struggle with words but I think you don’t… Please never stop writing
That puts a smile on a face. Thanks once again.. We shall continue to express..
“Depths touched
Words that blushed
A scenery of words
Graciously brushed”.
Yes we will.. Another set of lovely words..!
That’s is how relationship builds and soothes the mind.
Yes, especially with a selfless creature… Thanks for connecting with this!
Oh I love this one… tells a story ✨
Yeah, a life which we should embrace… Thank you for connecting with this!
So nice ! Thanks for sharing . And thank also for following my blog.
My pleasure… You have an amazing work out there. Keep going
Nice ending. These lines, too: “Each step brought confusion / My fatigue birthed illusion”.
Tried my best.. Thank you brother for your kind words!
Welcome. Your best is more than adequate!
Journey is far more important than the peak… and sense of accomplishment of touching the peak is fleeting too…. well written !!!
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Thank you so much for your precious words….