Earthly Loop

Here I am flourishing once more,
Fluttering in the earthly loop.
Echoing through the day,
Existing for one more day!

Bathing in the morning glow,
Breathing life which eventually grows
With every breath I take,
With every tiring step I take!

Oblivious of the destination,
I carry on to that path unknown.
With a dream in my restless heart,
To get that calming sleep at last!

©2020 Piyush Singh

23 thoughts on “Earthly Loop

  1. short-prose-fiction July 3, 2020 / 4:26 pm

    Love this piece.
    “Echoing through the day,
    Existing for one more day!”
    Excellent lines.

    • singhpiyush6089 July 4, 2020 / 6:22 am

      Thank you so much for your valuable feedback.. How this comment ended up in spam I really don’t know.. Sorry for the late response!

  2. Era July 3, 2020 / 4:37 pm

    It’s beautiful 😊

  3. akamentje July 3, 2020 / 7:55 pm

    Such beautiful words!

  4. Kritika July 4, 2020 / 5:50 am

    The apt photograph for the peaceful poetry.

      • Kritika July 4, 2020 / 6:05 am

        Pleasure is mine 🙂

  5. judeitakali July 6, 2020 / 11:51 am

    Woah, this picks you up and sends us places, beautiful writing, deep too

  6. Grace July 7, 2020 / 5:47 pm

    Great job. I like the repetition of sounds – it makes the poem very peaceful.

  7. Navin July 11, 2020 / 4:20 pm

    Beautiful lines Piyush.

      • Navin July 12, 2020 / 7:55 am

        You’re welcome…

        FYI –
        I’ve migrated my WP site & have published a few poems. If you haven’t received any notification, please visit “navinspoems.com” -> Enter your email in the pop up window OR check the widget under POETRY UPDATES on my site-> Click on SIGN UP. This way notification will be activated. Thanks a million for your help & ongoing support! 🙏❤️

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