Until the smoke turns weak

Underneath this skin,
Something deep within,
A fire burning ruthlessly,
Brewing the missing pieces .

Rebuilding the hope
Which was shattered
Long ago ‘cause of fear,
‘cause of loss of someone.

Keep breathing in the fog
Until the smoke turns weak
Until the suffocation loses
The battle against your will !

Navin November 20, 2021 / 9:19 pm

Beautifully written…nice to see you, Piyush…

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- singhpiyush6089 November 21, 2021 / 3:39 am
  
  Thank you Navin for your encouraging words…
  
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  - Navin November 22, 2021 / 7:51 am
    
    You’re welcome, Piyush
Lia November 23, 2021 / 4:08 am

I love your poetry – and the last stanza is really clever and hopeful! The photo is amazing. So glad to read your writing!

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- singhpiyush6089 November 23, 2021 / 12:18 pm
  
  Thank you for your wonderful words…
  
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Athira January 25, 2022 / 5:52 pm

Nice snap and writings too

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- singhpiyush6089 January 25, 2022 / 5:53 pm
  
  Thank you for your precious words Athira….
  
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  - Athira January 25, 2022 / 5:54 pm
    
    Pleasure is mine Piyush