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It is not appropriate to determine age of a man in years, the age of a man should be determined by the number of sacrifices he make.

From an ineffable symphony
To a cacophonic illusion
The world I attach to
Is my spirit’s confusion.

Through out my life
I laugh with my blind ego.
And when there is time
I refuse to let it go.

How pity it is
We lose our true identity.
With what we have,
We take nothing to eternity!

To a spiritual realm
From a material chaos
It’s a joyous liberation
From bodily tribulations!

©2020 Piyush Singh

28 thoughts on “Liberation

  1. Ishaan Sharma July 11, 2020 / 4:25 pm

    Wonderful and deep!

      • Ishaan Sharma July 11, 2020 / 4:26 pm

        You’re welcome sir!

  2. Bob Whiteside July 11, 2020 / 4:45 pm

    Wow, the line, “The world I attach to / Is my spirit’s confusion.” is really really good.

  3. Shreya July 11, 2020 / 5:09 pm

    Through out my life/ I laugh with my blind ego…Such deep and beautiful words!

      • Jay Bleu July 13, 2020 / 4:56 pm

        You’re welcome

  4. bejamin4 July 12, 2020 / 7:34 pm

    Nice work! Something to think about: “We take nothing to eternity!”

  5. suemariestlee July 12, 2020 / 8:20 pm

    Deep, spiritual, healing — beautifully expressed.

  6. Kritika July 13, 2020 / 5:26 am

    True that is. Humans have been fed all this I believe from the start which is a serious concern. Wonderful writing.

  7. HappySoul July 13, 2020 / 10:33 am

    We take nothing to eternity 👌great work !

  8. kinge July 20, 2020 / 7:15 pm

    Awesome writing.

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