A phenomenon
we can’t explain,
A complex puzzle
governed by no laws,
Lying in a minute
corner of milky way,
A tiny spectacle
twinkling with delight,
The precious , shimmering
The story of our lives !
Written in the fabric
Of space and time,
A mural sketched
In the vast breathing cosmos,
Beating hard inside
The womb of chaos,
Our precious jewel,
The breathing
Story of our lives !
©2020 Piyush Singh
Good! Breathtaking 👍
Thank you for your kind words!
Amazing!
Thank you Ishaan !
You’re welcome.
You have captured nature in perfection . A poetic and s visual delight .
Thank you so much Veena !
Beautiful Piyush!
Thank you so much for your precious words…
A beautiful and a wise poem. Indeed our stories are complex and seemingly ungoverned by the laws of nature. I especially liked the phrases, ‘written in the fabric of space and time.’ ‘the breathing cosmos’ and ‘the womb of chaos’. Nice choice of words, well done! 🙌
Can’t thank you enough for your wonderful words…thank you so much for your precious words…
This is really amazing👍. I loved reading it.
Thank you so much Nitesh !
My pleasure😃
Beautifully penned, Piyush 😊😊
Thank you so much Era…
You’re most welcome ☺
😍😍😍
Thank you so much for your kind words…
Very nice 👌
Thank you for your kind words….
Lovely🕊
Thank you so much Akshita…
The feed’s in need of more of this.. re-posted: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/20/a-breathing-story-piyush-singh-the-perceptions-square/
Thanks for sharing. 🙂
Thanks a ton for your support…
A really good poem! Thank you!
Thank you so much for your kind words…
A tiny spectacle in the minute corner of Milky Way.. so true isn’t it! Beautifully written!
Yes it is…thank you for your kind words…
Beautiful and with that I will take the coming week as a chance to answer this question.
Thank you so much for your precious words
Good as always! Loving this part: “A mural sketched / In the vast breathing cosmos, / Beating hard inside / The womb of chaos,”.
Thank you Benjamin… really tried my best…
Beautifully written! ❤️
Thank you Joana for your precious words…
Wonderful writing. 🙂
Thank you so much Kritika…
My pleasure 🙂
It’s amazing 🙌🙌
Thank you so much..
Oh wow, this is gorgeous!!!
Thank you Lia for your precious words..
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Beautiful poem and eloquent photography.
Thank you for your kind words…
You’re welcome 🙂
It’s really accurate and the words arranged beautifully.
Thank you Apurva
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