A Breathing Story

A phenomenon
we can’t explain,
A complex puzzle
governed by no laws,
Lying in a minute
corner of milky way,
A tiny spectacle
twinkling with delight,
The precious , shimmering
The story of our lives !

Written in the fabric
Of space and time,
A mural sketched
In the vast breathing cosmos,
Beating hard inside
The womb of chaos,
Our precious jewel,
The breathing
Story of our lives !

©2020 Piyush Singh

49 thoughts on “A Breathing Story

  1. SRIKANTH September 20, 2020 / 6:25 am

    Good! Breathtaking 👍

  2. Veena September 20, 2020 / 6:51 am

    You have captured nature in perfection . A poetic and s visual delight .

  3. AP2 September 20, 2020 / 6:51 am

    Beautiful Piyush!

  4. uzzawal1911 September 20, 2020 / 6:53 am

    A beautiful and a wise poem. Indeed our stories are complex and seemingly ungoverned by the laws of nature. I especially liked the phrases, ‘written in the fabric of space and time.’ ‘the breathing cosmos’ and ‘the womb of chaos’. Nice choice of words, well done! 🙌

    • singhpiyush6089 September 20, 2020 / 8:04 am

      Can’t thank you enough for your wonderful words…thank you so much for your precious words…

  5. nitesh September 20, 2020 / 7:06 am

    This is really amazing👍. I loved reading it.

      • nitesh September 20, 2020 / 7:41 am

        My pleasure😃

  6. Era September 20, 2020 / 9:00 am

    Beautifully penned, Piyush 😊😊

      • Era September 20, 2020 / 4:28 pm

        You’re most welcome ☺

  7. ullehaddock September 20, 2020 / 11:47 am

    A really good poem! Thank you!

  8. HappySoul September 20, 2020 / 4:08 pm

    A tiny spectacle in the minute corner of Milky Way.. so true isn’t it! Beautifully written!

  9. Mireya September 21, 2020 / 1:01 am

    Beautiful and with that I will take the coming week as a chance to answer this question.

  10. bejamin4 September 21, 2020 / 10:09 am

    Good as always! Loving this part: “A mural sketched / In the vast breathing cosmos, / Beating hard inside / The womb of chaos,”.

  11. Joana September 21, 2020 / 11:53 am

    Beautifully written! ❤️

  12. Kritika September 22, 2020 / 5:22 pm

    Wonderful writing. 🙂

      • Kritika September 28, 2020 / 9:24 am

        My pleasure 🙂

  13. asthaisha September 23, 2020 / 4:14 pm

    It’s amazing 🙌🙌

  14. Lia September 26, 2020 / 7:55 pm

    Oh wow, this is gorgeous!!!

  15. apurva October 17, 2020 / 7:45 am

    It’s really accurate and the words arranged beautifully.

  16. Akhilesh_Yadav October 18, 2020 / 8:54 am

    galaxyexploers.blogspot.com

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